I will grow someday

D'awwwww!!! So cute! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt="" title="Love"/> I love how funny it is! Makes me wanna just squeeze him.

Overall, great concept and idea. I love the message of how drinking milk is good for you (though I also hate it too <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>), and I love the shading on the milk bottles. The foreshortening on the bottle Ed's drinking is kind of extreme, but easily fixable.

However, there are a few things that make this kind of... flat. I like the shadows behind the milk bottles on the shelves, but they look kind of repetitive. Maybe you could add a little more variety? Also, Ed's flattening out. I can see some highlights in him, but I think if you added some softer highlights to his coat, face, etc., he'd stick out more, since he IS the foreground. Adding on, you should add darker shadows to the shelves, to that one area toward the left. If the shelves weren't so bright and flat, it'd probably make Ed stand out even more.

Just fix those couple of things, and this picture will stand out to anyone! Hope this helps! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>